YUCKY PERSIMMON
As I smell the persimmon A beautiful smell dashed through my nose.lick! My mouth Touch the edge of the skin of persimmon. Spit! spit! I nervously contributed to spit out those The sour taste got me going crazy, on the count three,1 2 3!!crunch! munch! it was so sour I covered my mouth to not spit it out. seeds and orange flesh invade my whole entire mouth my mouth starts with shivver, the yucky taste took over my mouth.
My Mouth started to disable because of the yucky Seeded
fruit. anxiously I figured out why no one ate them at my house suddenly! we were allowed to put them in the bin loads of others just keep eating the yucky disgusting persimmon,
I sprinted to the rubbish bin I had to slam it because the bin was surrounded by Snotty tissues,As I threw the persimmon down into the rubbish and the juice splashed out with great power.in my head I thought about if I was even going to touch or think about Another Persimmon
AGAIN!!!! By Houston YR 5
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