Te reo maori persuasive Writing

 TE reo across all of new zealand?

Everyone speaks their original languages that they’ve been taught ? Right we all have one fluent language we speak. But, Imagine living In Aotearoa or as James Cook named It New Zealand, a place so special for Its language. Maori, Maori is a language that many people such as your Nan"s, Papa’s, or maybe even parents could speak. That's why we need to start teaching as much Maori to the kids as we can.

Did you know that the unique and rather fascinating language was nearly lost back In the 80s. kids In schools would actually be whipped for speaking the language just think about being whipped for speaking the one and very only way you can communicate. it’s time to start fresh and turn this the other way around. The GPS was wrong.

Aotearoa, people in Aotearoa actually are fluent speakers. It would have been hard not only being one of the hardest languages on earth, but for some people across the world with accents and really dim, high pitch, and low voices. But just the fact that the language has many ways of communicating. You could say Hi to your neighbor. But wouldn’t you rather be more merrier and say kia ora, overall It is our, yours , and maybe your parents culture. if Aotearoa can only speak it, and it is from Aotearoa doesn’t that mean It is unique? like tonga, or has a special place In our heart no matter who you are or where you are. You can still speak Te reo Maori.

Aotearoa, the land of Maori and all the history. Not because of Its history but because of the language. it needs to be taught more often. Sure captain cook may have voyaged here In 1769 but then the famous voyager kupe arrived In early 925, many centuries before James did. Although kupe found the magnificent Island Maui, the demigod of the wind and sea, pulled the north Island up with the hook of his ancestors and for bait he smeared blood from his own nose. The other south, not so much. Some do believe that the south Island is maui waka. Despite all the history. The voyagers must have been very smart with the stars and what not. But it's our job to keep the language and all the stories pass down from generation to generation.

This is just a demonstrated that, te reo maori should be taught in all attending schools of Aotearoa. it should be compulsory and standard that we are learning te reo. Lets take charge and make room for maori culture.

Te Ika a Maui Animation

For the past 2-3 weeks In Hub moana we have been learning all about the demigod, trickster, and himself. Maui we were set too write and 90% writing on wte writing org for kids. Once we have completed that we were set to Create and animation on the story but add audio, a video, and if you'd like you could add sound affects. For example, like when he springed out of the canoe. But overall I enjoy what I have created. 

 I found It Really easy figuring out what or how I was going to create the slides and what backgrounds,tools, and even the pictures I would say I've done a fine job

 I Think It was hard and frustrating to,get the animation done In a block, when I was distracted by my friends trying to tell me a song they tapped me every 3 seconds so the only way to get out of the conversation Is to see want they want. Lease they'd leave me alone 3 mins later taps me I look 5 mins later taps me I look and It kinda just goes and never stops. 

 Next time I want to Increase my quality and make It realistic I could of added more maori designs and actually things that would of been back In those days. Hope you enjoyed the post:)

 

My Persuasive Poster

 From july this post was.

Poetry from 2019

MY POETRY

what's an shark

hungry meat eater,sharp vanishing teeth,dangerous sea creature

well known,killer for many years your gone if you harm one of them,stay calm not scared you don't wanna be eaten

That´s a shark

i learnt that oceans provide 80% of our oxygen

what is the ocean? 

provides our oxygen beautiful fish and coral

 reefs dangerous things in the sea that are mysterious.

Book parade 2019

Title:Brick wonders

Author:Elsmore warren

The year:2014

Recommended Ages: in my opinion I believe this book belongs to 8-12 

Interesting thing about it:

I love this story because I am a big fan of lego. I say this book is about creating things you
can make with your imagination,like making cities a lot of buildings that are really big and
look cool when you play with mini lego people,every pack of lego should allow you to claim a
little figure letting you allow yourself to let you imagination run wild that is the topic an
what the story is about.

I like that i made my writing sound interesting.

Lego is a toy that lets you build amazing buildings.
Next time i think i could add more interesting facts about the toy named lego.

Twelve days of christmas kiwi edition.

 We were doing christmas roataions,for this one we were put into groups and had to make a kiwi edition of twelve days of christmas.

I found it easy to find stuff that related to new zealand.

I found it hard to make a good topic match with the photos

Next time i will encourage my group to try harder and give a 150%

Ka kite

What christmas means to me!

 We were asked by the gisborne helrod to write a letter about what christmas means to us. You'd be inspired if you had the splendid opportunity to do this task.

I found it easy to make my poem or letter have a rhyme 

I found it hard finding suitable images for the creative version

Next time i will make it cooler than before

In the night!

 Hi this is some poetry that i mostly adore.

And No! it's not about had loud and old lady snores.

It's about in the night when we are all asleep.

Anyway you'd better go read this for yourself hope you can sleep tonight, 

With sorrow sounds...

Guy fawkes

This is my acrostic poem about guy fawkes. And how fireworks react to me, yesterday the teachers set some sparklers, so we could brainstorm some keywords or how the smell reacts to your nose. Anyway i felt so inspired by this piece of writing and i hope you do to.

I found it quite easy to make it rhyme and kind of have a jingle to it.

I found it hard to, make it look presentable and good enough to post on my blog.

Next time I am going to try harder than ever to, find a better colour to highlight the starting letter.

Anyway i am so proud of this post. I suggest you have a go to:)

Ka kite

Postcard 2

This is my postcard.

On slide 2 the writing is blending in with the lines so it is not that clear to read. What i found was easy was finding the topic that i wanted and the selected images in the slide that match the topic. What i found challenging but i overcame was downloading the photo that i had to use in remove.bg. Next time, I will intend to make it look more realistic.

Ka kite

High jump reflection

 On Athletics day i was competing in all of the events, and just giving it a go, my most underrated event that i most hated High jump. My skinny little legs just weren't created for this sport, but i thought to myself at least i gave it a go.

In my writing the high jump event. All the feeling's that i felt allowed me to include so much inspiring and emotive words this made me use a thesaurus online, and find a new word for sadly=sorrowfully

Ka kite for now  

What you need in a recount

This is what me and my writing buddy vinzent know that this is what you should include in recounts.

1. Choose something that has happened recently so you remember more what you are writing about what happened that day.

2. Use past tense, recounts are something that has happened before.

3. Use keywords on how your emotions felt,

4. Use really compelling words that drag the reader into the story that catch there attention.

5. Use rich words on what was happening.

6. Use ! marks and full stops in the correct spots.

7. Include a title so your reader know's what he's or she's is in for.

8.  Use a 123 planning, its kinda like a content page.

9.Use interesting sentencing starters.

10. Use paragraphs use one idea to that one paragraph

We were set to choose 10 facts or ideas of what you should have in recount writing, with your writing buddy.

I found it hard to choose my facts.

We found it easy agreeing on what to choose.

Next time i will use my time wisely.

Going to rugby story:)

This is a story that i mostly adore.'

This recount is all around what happens or what comes in my way, when i trudge happly to rugby. I love this story because it was made with some much within me, so emotion, this is absolutely what i hear,smell,see every single friday, well not looping the exact same emotions just the same feeling,

We were set off to write a recount of our choose, of course i chose rugby even though i might not be great at it. But because i put so much effort into it and more time that a other hobbies that also enjoy, Even if it was soccer i probably put more emotions and power into this heck of a sport.

I love what happens when i make my way to sports, i can feel, see, hear, and best of all smell. 

Persuasive animation

 Animation time, learning as well as having fun, one blog post before this one i publish a piece of persuasive writing were you convinced? it was what would happen if we didn't look after our local earth, if you weren't i made a animation as you can see, based on if people littered into our oceans,local rivers,and 

even rubbish ends up into a sewage treatment plant were yuck sludge goes. But this is about what would happen if our water was yuck and the ph wasn't the standard ph that we drinked.

When studying this i learnt that the earth in 2050 will increase and provide a less percentage of water. And more food will soon be less.

I found it hard to insert pics that match because i added a fireman instead of a dumpster man

Enjoy... and make a change

Persuasive writing

 This is a story of why you and anyone you know who litters make sure to tell them there making less income of food water and not just harming us it also harms creatures know as, Pigs,Cows, you name it. I made this story not because i was set too, as well as to help people who do not respect the earth and to make a little change in the oceans,streets,rivers, the rubbish is bountiful.

I think we should take care of mother earth, without her we would be extinct.

I learnt over 5,000 pieces of rubbish is dump into lakes every day here in new zealand according to a website named plastic kids the link is in the slide on reference,

I kinda thought it was challenging to find information that was only linked and found in new zealand, instead i found a website that said there a 5 islands made out of rubbish, plastic, mostly coke bottles, and one was the size of texas.

We need to take better care of the earth when we hurt the earth we create a less income of food and water soon after you read this slide deck there is no way you would not want to change.

ka kite for now...

Wild lab recount

We were learning about the wild lab.

I found it hard to find consiest words based on what i was feeling.

I found it easy to desribe what I was thinking.

Next time I will try and use the correct tense.

What Comments should have animation.

We were learning about what comment should have.

I found it hard to have the patience to place down a letter in the cloudy text.

I found it easy to put my story into a animation

Next time i will try to make my animation a bit more fancy and cool.

Quality comments Google drawing

We were learning about what quality comments looked like.

I found it hard to think what thoughtful,helpful,and a next time to add to my comment.

I found it easy to find infomation because of a slide had a boundful amount.

Next time i will try add more facts and infomation about quality comments.

Tane and the nine stars

I found it easy to think about my story that was based on matariki.

I found it hard to work because everyone was chatting around me.

Next time i will add more details and action.

Matariki Report

I found it easy to research because on our team Toroa site there is already heaps of Infomation.

 I found it hard to work because people where whispering next to me.\

We were learning about matariki,and the nine stars

Next time i will give 100% Instead of 50%